{"id":1091,"date":"2021-06-23T17:15:05","date_gmt":"2021-06-23T09:15:05","guid":{"rendered":"https:\/\/ielts-s.eduhk.hk\/?page_id=1091"},"modified":"2021-07-28T14:48:22","modified_gmt":"2021-07-28T06:48:22","slug":"speaker-1-task-1-copy-copy-2-copy-3-copy-2-copy","status":"publish","type":"page","link":"https:\/\/ielts-s.eduhk.hk\/?page_id=1091","title":{"rendered":"Speaker 6 Task 2"},"content":{"rendered":"\n\n\t<iframe loading=\"lazy\" width=\"560\" height=\"315\" src=\"https:\/\/www.youtube.com\/embed\/n3Kt6fJ_srM\" title=\"YouTube video player\" frameborder=\"0\" allow=\"accelerometer; autoplay; clipboard-write; encrypted-media; gyroscope; picture-in-picture\" allowfullscreen><\/iframe>\n\t\n\t\t\t\t\t\t<h4 tabindex=\"0\">Transcript<\/h4>\n\t\t\t\n\n<p>E:\u00a0Alright. Now I&#8217;m going to give you a topic. And I&#8217;d like you to talk about it for one to two minutes before you talk, you&#8217;ll have one minute to think about what you&#8217;re going to say\u00a0and you can make some notes if you wish.\u00a0You understand?\u00a0<\/p>\n<p>S: OK.\u00a0<\/p>\n<p>E:\u00a0I&#8217;d like you to talk about the type of clothing you like to wear. So first of all, you have one minute to prepare.\u00a0<i>(After one-minute preparation)\u00a0<\/i>All right. Now remember, you&#8217;ve got one to two minutes for this\u00a0so don&#8217;t worry if I stop you,\u00a0I&#8217;ll tell you when the time is up. Can you start speaking\u00a0now please?\u00a0<\/p>\n<p>S:\u00a0OK. Today I would like to share the type of clothes which I do like it. First of all, this clothing type is a, is a suit because this, this is symbol of professional. If I wear the &#8230; if I wear the suit, I can make a state of serious and professional to others. And actually, when will I wear this type of clothes? I will wear the suits during business presentation or having interview with &#8230; having interview during workplace because actually, before I study at the Education University of Hong Kong, I&#8217;ve studied at the college &#8230; in Hong Kong Community College, which is taking a course of Business Marketing. And at this course, I need to have some business presentation which I need to wear the suit to conduct the presentation because this is a formal dressing and I can have a dressing style with the whole team &#8230; with the same, same dressing style. And besides, during workplace &#8230; in my future workplace, I must wear this type of clothes to have an interview with the boss or manager, because they can just &#8230; looking at this clothing style, they will feel that you&#8217;re serious and &#8230;\u00a0<\/p>\n<p>E:\u00a0Thank you. Sorry to interrupt you.\u00a0\u00a0<\/p>\n\t<h3>\n\t\t\t\tGeneral Descriptions:\n\t\t\t<\/h3>\n\t\t<nav>\n\t\t\t<ul>\n\t\t\t\t\t\t\t\t<li data-index=\"0\">\n\t\t\t\t\t<h5>\n\t\t\t\t\t\t<a href=\"javascript:void(0);\">FLUENCY AND COHERENCE\n\t\t\t\t\t\t\t\t\t\t\t\t<\/a>\n\t\t\t\t\t<\/h5>\n\t\t\t\t<\/li>\n\t\t\t\t\t\t\t\t<li data-index=\"1\">\n\t\t\t\t\t<h5>\n\t\t\t\t\t\t<a href=\"javascript:void(0);\">LEXICAL RESOURCE\n\t\t\t\t\t\t\t\t\t\t\t\t<\/a>\n\t\t\t\t\t<\/h5>\n\t\t\t\t<\/li>\n\t\t\t\t\t\t\t\t<li data-index=\"2\">\n\t\t\t\t\t<h5>\n\t\t\t\t\t\t<a href=\"javascript:void(0);\">GRAMMAR\n\t\t\t\t\t\t\t\t\t\t\t\t<\/a>\n\t\t\t\t\t<\/h5>\n\t\t\t\t<\/li>\n\t\t\t\t\t\t\t\t<li data-index=\"3\">\n\t\t\t\t\t<h5>\n\t\t\t\t\t\t<a href=\"javascript:void(0);\">PRONUNCIATION \n\t\t\t\t\t\t\t\t\t\t\t\t<\/a>\n\t\t\t\t\t<\/h5>\n\t\t\t\t<\/li>\n\t\t\t\t\t\t\t<\/ul>\n\t\t<\/nav>\n\t\t\t\t\t<h5>\n\t\t\t\t\t\t\t\t\t\t\t\tFLUENCY AND COHERENCE\n\t\t\t\t\t\t\t\t\t\t\t<\/h5>\n\t\t\t\t\t<p><strong><u>General Description<\/u><\/strong>\u00a0<\/p>\n<p>\u00a0<\/p>\n<p>Repetition:\u00a04\u00a0times\u00a0<\/p>\n<p>\u00a0<\/p>\n<p>Self-correction:\u00a03\u00a0times\u00a0<\/p>\n<p>\u00a0<\/p>\n<p><u>Discourse markers (10\u00a0times)<\/u>\u00a0<\/p>\n<p>Actually: 2 times\u00a0<\/p>\n<p>First of all: 1 time\u00a0<\/p>\n<p>OK: 1 time\u00a0<\/p>\n<p>\u00a0<\/p>\n<p><u>Connectives (13\u00a0times)<\/u>\u00a0<\/p>\n<p>And:\u00a06\u00a0times\u00a0<\/p>\n<p>Because:\u00a04\u00a0times\u00a0<\/p>\n<p>Or: 2 times\u00a0<\/p>\n<p>If:\u00a01\u00a0time\u00a0<\/p>\n<p>\u00a0<\/p>\n<p>Total number of words: 202 words\u00a0<\/p>\n<p>Speech rate: 202 words \u00f7 117.90s = 1.71words\/second\u00a0<\/p>\n\n\t\t\t\t\t<h5>\n\t\t\t\t\t\t\t\t\t\t\t\tLEXICAL RESOURCE\n\t\t\t\t\t\t\t\t\t\t\t<\/h5>\n\t\t\t\t\t<p><strong><u>General Description<\/u><\/strong>\u00a0<\/p>\n<p>\u00a0<\/p>\n<p>Less common words:\u00a0no\u00a0less common word\u00a0is\u00a0identified.\u00a0<\/p>\n<p>\u00a0<\/p>\n<p>Paraphrase:\u00a0no\u00a0paraphrase is coded.\u00a0<\/p>\n<p>\u00a0<\/p>\n<p>Idiomatic expressions:\u00a0no\u00a0idiomatic expression is identified.\u00a0<\/p>\n<p>\u00a0<\/p>\n<p>Collocations:\u00a01\u00a0collocation\u00a0is\u00a0identified\u00a0(taking a course).\u00a0<\/p>\n<p>\u00a0<\/p>\n<p><u>Appropriacy of the words used:\u00a0<\/u>10\u00a0inappropriate uses of words are coded.\u00a0<\/p>\n<p>Inappropriate word choice: 5 times\u00a0\u00a0<br \/>(make\u00a0a\u00a0state\u00a0of\u00a0\u2192\u00a0project a sense of;\u00a0\u00a0<br \/>formal\u00a0dressing\u00a0\u2192\u00a0formal clothing;\u00a0\u00a0<br \/>a\u00a0dressing\u00a0style\u00a0\u2192\u00a0a clothing style;\u00a0\u00a0<br \/>same\u00a0dressing\u00a0style\u00a0\u2192\u00a0same clothing style)\u00a0<\/p>\n<p>\u00a0<\/p>\n<p>Inappropriate collocation:\u00a04\u00a0times\u00a0\u00a0<br \/>(interview\u00a0during\u00a0workplace\u00a0\u2192\u00a0interviews in the workplace;\u00a0\u00a0<br \/>studied &#8230;\u00a0in\u00a0Hong Kong Community College\u00a0\u2192\u00a0studied &#8230; at Hong Kong Community College;\u00a0\u00a0<br \/>a course\u00a0of\u00a0Business Marketing\u00a0\u2192\u00a0a course in Business Marketing;\u00a0\u00a0<br \/>have a &#8230; style\u00a0with\u00a0the whole team\u00a0\u2192\u00a0have a &#8230; style\u00a0in common with \/ that matched with \/ that was the same as\u00a0the whole team)\u00a0<\/p>\n<p>\u00a0<\/p>\n<p>Inappropriate word form:\u00a03\u00a0times\u00a0\u00a0<br \/>(symbol of\u00a0professional\u00a0\u2192\u00a0symbol of professionalism;\u00a0\u00a0<br \/>of\u00a0serious\u00a0and\u00a0professional\u00a0\u2192\u00a0of seriousness and professionalism)\u00a0\u00a0<\/p>\n\n\t\t\t\t\t<h5>\n\t\t\t\t\t\t\t\t\t\t\t\tGRAMMAR\n\t\t\t\t\t\t\t\t\t\t\t<\/h5>\n\t\t\t\t\t<p><b>General Description<\/b>\u00a0<\/p>\n<p>\u00a0<\/p>\n<p>Error (19\u00a0times)\u00a0<\/p>\n<p>Singular\/ plural noun form:\u00a06\u00a0times\u00a0\u00a0<br \/>(during business\u00a0<i>presentation<\/i>\u00a0or having\u00a0<i>interview<\/i>\u00a0&#8230; having\u00a0<i>interview<\/i>\u00a0during\u00a0\u2192\u00a0during business presentations or having interviews &#8230; having interviews;\u00a0\u00a0<br \/>before I\u00a0<i>study<\/i>\u00a0\u2192\u00a0before my studies;\u00a0\u00a0<br \/>some business\u00a0<i>presentation<\/i>\u00a0\u2192\u00a0some business presentations;\u00a0\u00a0<br \/><i>this<\/i>\u00a0type of clothes\u00a0\u2192\u00a0these type of clothes)\u00a0<\/p>\n<p>\u00a0<\/p>\n<p>Inappropriate\u00a0tense:\u00a05\u00a0times\u00a0\u00a0<br \/>(I&#8217;ve\u00a0studied at the college\u00a0\u2192\u00a0I studies at the college;\u00a0\u00a0<br \/>which &#8230;\u00a0<i>taking<\/i>\u00a0\u2192\u00a0where &#8230; take;\u00a0\u00a0<br \/>I\u00a0<i>need<\/i>\u00a0\u2192\u00a0I needed;\u00a0\u00a0<br \/>which I\u00a0<i>need<\/i>\u00a0\u2192\u00a0which I needed;\u00a0\u00a0<br \/>and I\u00a0<i>can<\/i>\u00a0\u2192\u00a0and I could)\u00a0<\/p>\n<p>\u00a0<\/p>\n<p>Inappropriate relative pronoun: 2 times\u00a0\u00a0<br \/>(College,\u00a0<i>which<\/i>\u00a0\u2192\u00a0College, where;\u00a0\u00a0<br \/>presentation\u00a0<i>which<\/i>\u00a0\u2192\u00a0presentations when \/ at which)\u00a0<\/p>\n<p>\u00a0<\/p>\n<p>Inappropriate article: 1 time (<i>the<\/i>\u00a0suit\u00a0\u2192\u00a0a suit)\u00a0<\/p>\n<p>\u00a0<\/p>\n<p>Inappropriate pronoun: 1 time (before\u00a0<i>I<\/i>\u00a0study\u00a0\u2192\u00a0before my studies)\u00a0<\/p>\n<p>\u00a0<\/p>\n<p>Missing\u00a0article: 1 time (this is ^symbol\u00a0\u2192\u00a0this is a symbol)\u00a0<\/p>\n<p>\u00a0<\/p>\n<p>Missing\u00a0subject: 1 time (which &#8230; ^taking a\u00a0\u2192\u00a0where &#8230; I take)\u00a0<\/p>\n<p>\u00a0<\/p>\n<p>Redundant object: 1 time\u00a0<\/p>\n<p>Redundant article: 1 time\u00a0<\/p>\n<p>\u00a0<\/p>\n<p>Complex verb group (1\u00a0time)\u00a0<\/p>\n<p>Emphatic &#8216;do&#8217;\u00a0<\/p>\n<p>\u00a0<\/p>\n<p>Subordinate clause (10\u00a0times)\u00a0<\/p>\n<p>Adverbial clause:\u00a06\u00a0times\u00a0<\/p>\n<p>Relative clause:\u00a03\u00a0times\u00a0\u00a0<\/p>\n<p>Noun clause:\u00a01\u00a0time\u00a0\u00a0<\/p>\n\n\t\t\t\t\t<h5>\n\t\t\t\t\t\t\t\t\t\t\t\tPRONUNCIATION \n\t\t\t\t\t\t\t\t\t\t\t<\/h5>\n\t\t\t\t\t<p><strong><u>General Description<\/u><\/strong>\u00a0<\/p>\n<p>\u00a0<\/p>\n<p>Consonant error:\u00a017 times (this; with;\u00a0the; must; clothes; clothing; style;\u00a0suit;\u00a0suits)\u00a0<\/p>\n<p>\u00a0<\/p>\n<p>Vowel error:\u00a0not coded\u00a0<\/p>\n<p>\u00a0<\/p>\n<p>Syllable stress error: not coded\u00a0<\/p>\n<p>\u00a0<\/p>\n<p>Sentence stress error: not coded\u00a0\u00a0<\/p>\n\n\t\t\t\t\t<!-- \/content -->\n\t<!-- \/tabs -->\n\t\t\t<a href=\"http:\/\/175.159.245.171\/?page_id=1084\" target=\"_self\" role=\"button\" aria-label=\"Back\" rel=\"noopener\">\n\t\t\t\t\t\t\tBack\n\t\t<\/a>\n\n","protected":false},"excerpt":{"rendered":"<p>Transcript E:\u00a0Alright. Now I&#8217;m going to give you a topic. And I&#8217;d like you to talk about it for one to two minutes before you talk, you&#8217;ll have one minute to think about what you&#8217;re going to say\u00a0and you can make some notes if you wish.\u00a0You understand?\u00a0 S: OK.\u00a0 E:\u00a0I&#8217;d like you to talk about &hellip;<\/p>\n<p class=\"read-more\"> <a class=\"\" href=\"https:\/\/ielts-s.eduhk.hk\/?page_id=1091\"> <span class=\"screen-reader-text\">Speaker 6 Task 2<\/span> Read More \u00bb<\/a><\/p>\n","protected":false},"author":1,"featured_media":0,"parent":0,"menu_order":0,"comment_status":"closed","ping_status":"closed","template":"","meta":{"footnotes":""},"class_list":["post-1091","page","type-page","status-publish","hentry"],"_links":{"self":[{"href":"https:\/\/ielts-s.eduhk.hk\/index.php?rest_route=\/wp\/v2\/pages\/1091","targetHints":{"allow":["GET"]}}],"collection":[{"href":"https:\/\/ielts-s.eduhk.hk\/index.php?rest_route=\/wp\/v2\/pages"}],"about":[{"href":"https:\/\/ielts-s.eduhk.hk\/index.php?rest_route=\/wp\/v2\/types\/page"}],"author":[{"embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/ielts-s.eduhk.hk\/index.php?rest_route=\/wp\/v2\/users\/1"}],"replies":[{"embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/ielts-s.eduhk.hk\/index.php?rest_route=%2Fwp%2Fv2%2Fcomments&post=1091"}],"version-history":[{"count":6,"href":"https:\/\/ielts-s.eduhk.hk\/index.php?rest_route=\/wp\/v2\/pages\/1091\/revisions"}],"predecessor-version":[{"id":1384,"href":"https:\/\/ielts-s.eduhk.hk\/index.php?rest_route=\/wp\/v2\/pages\/1091\/revisions\/1384"}],"wp:attachment":[{"href":"https:\/\/ielts-s.eduhk.hk\/index.php?rest_route=%2Fwp%2Fv2%2Fmedia&parent=1091"}],"curies":[{"name":"wp","href":"https:\/\/api.w.org\/{rel}","templated":true}]}}